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robi-bobi.net
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# Posted: 13 Jul 05 18:28
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this pic is named goodbye all (with lowercase 'g')
your opinions?
P.S. the story about taking this pictire here
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Teun
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# Posted: 13 Jul 05 18:44
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I think it's really nice, the duotone works really well here.
great shot!
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robi-bobi.net
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# Posted: 14 Jul 05 02:40
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thank you
any sugestions?
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hoyte
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# Posted: 14 Jul 05 06:38
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Hi!
I was just curious: Obviously you darkened the edges in this photograph... Did you do this the analogue way, in the darkroom, or on photoshop, or did you use grad ND filters?
just curious,
during color grading for motion film i came across the expression "putting an asshole on something" for this effect...
regards
hoyte
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robi-bobi.net
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# Posted: 14 Jul 05 06:54
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I made this shot with my Canon Digital Rebel (300D).
you can see original file here:
http://www.robi-bobi.net/pictures/people/goodbye-all-1-original.jpg
(just resized, without any modifications - EXIF is also in the file)
I didn't have any filters on the cam during shooting
as you can see, big part of final look is done in photo editing software
actually I experimented a lot with this picture, and it is my first hard modified one
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hoyte
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# Posted: 14 Jul 05 07:04
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Ok I see!
Shot through a tunnel of trees and plants. Actually interesting to see the original....
thanks
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robi-bobi.net
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# Posted: 14 Jul 05 17:08
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glad to help :)
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alex ringer
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# Posted: 4 Aug 05 18:53
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Robi,
Unlike Teun I don't find many good things about your photo except for the overall composition. The walking man looks as if someone told him to halt and freeze. This takes the motion from the composition. Or maybe it's the fault of shooting him from behind and not from his side. The brown/sepia tones don't act naturally and looks as if hand painted. In comparison to the original I think it's an improvement.
You've also wanted to create an appealing designed look to your photo and placed the title in the wrong side, balance to your 'signature' try to remove it or at least place it on the right hand and dimming your signature, and see the difference.
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robi-bobi.net
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# Posted: 5 Aug 05 10:20
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Alex, thanks for your opinion.
The walking man looks as if someone told him to halt and freeze...
Or maybe it's the fault of shooting him from behind and not from his side
Well, I didn't. THe photo was taken while walking - it is not a set-up
I am not sure if shooting from the side will have the effect of leaving - this is what I originally meant with goodbye all
about the brown/sepia and 'hand painted' look:
I like it :)
about the signature: I always look for suggestions about framing and similar, so I will check yours.
again, thanks for your comment, I appreciate your time
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